You have just moved into a new house and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come to the party
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. John,
I am, Bibhu kalita, a neighbor next to your apartment, and have shifted to the new apartment, A-32, last Monday with my wife.
As a ritual, a home-warming party suppose to be organised by me on this weekend. I have invited all my office colleagues for the celebration. Party will start from 11 a.m. with "Ganesh Puja" - a Hindu ritual, followed by lunch. Most of the items like decoration, arrangement of lunch are out sourced as a result there will be noise since 7 a.m. on the weekend. I have taken care of noise issue, and try my level best to minimize the disturbance on Sunday. However, if there will be any noise, I would like to apologize in advance.
It is my privilege to invite you to be present with your family on this auspicious day. I am quite sure that you will love our arrangement, and hope our bonding will get stronger.
I will be waiting to see you on Sunday. Thanks in anticipation.
Your sincerely,
Bibhu Kalita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...e. As a ritual, a home-warming party suppose to be organised by me on this weekend. ...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re of noise issue, and try my level best to minimize the disturbance on Sunday. H...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64161849711 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76209670848 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6464116941 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9166666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14422793343 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554896199963 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061309640577 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820327995904 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381925200271 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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