You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear sir
I am one of the subscribers of the World Info, one of the most renowned and sought after magazine all around the globe, who is penning down this missive in connection with the inappropriate cognizance which is being bestowed in a recent article about my town Jarg.
Ereyesterday, when I read the same I realised that your editorial is misguiding masses as it was written over there that there are three schools and one college in my hometown which certainly is a false statement as Jarg has two schools, both being affiliated from ICSE board, and has one university which is in the top 20 of the list of best universities. I know, this might be a minor misinterpretation; however, being an international magazine I perceive you should be obliged to provide gospel truth as masses from different nations will read this information and will make perceptions according to that.
I came across this on your website which will soon be printed as hardcopies, so I assume it can be possible to change the numbers and put the right ones.
I hope you will look into this as soon as possible to spread the authentic cognizance.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully
Arshdeep Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...sity which is in the top 20 of the list of best universities. I know, this might be a m...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the numbers and put the right ones. I hope you will look into this as soon as...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86764705882 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88349900518 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.23380043 44.8134815571 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.5 76.5299724578 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.0 16.8248392259 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16759388492 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788044473911 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349534599713 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077958024472 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042356557032 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 8.37731958763 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.