A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask for your help in finding a job in your country, you have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/her
tell you friend about a job and what sort of work it involves
say why you think the job would be suitable for him
explain how to apply for a job
Dear Sir
Hi! I am hale and hearty and hope you find my letter in good spirits too. I am writing in reciprocation to your letter asking me about searching job here in India.
Ereyesterday, when I was surfing on web, I found an advert regarding a vacancy in Alex Enterprises, one of the most prestigious and sought after companies in Ludhiana, and then when I read about the requirements I was thrilled as you are the perfect person they are looking for because of not only your extraordinary writing skills but also due to your degree in computer. In this job, the candidate is supposed to respond to professional emails and to prepare some databases on Excel and Microsoft PowerPoint which I'm pretty sure you are pro at. Is it not a valuable opportunity to you considering your qualifications and skills?
You can apply online through the website that is www.alexinterprises.com. The applications are open and the deadline to fill the same is 21 November 2020, so be quick. Make sure you add some of your best writing samples to impress the employers.
Best of luck! I am confident that you will ace this one. Play my regards to your progenitors and love to Ruby
Yours truly
Arsh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-02-07 | ielts_tony | 89 | view |
| 2021-05-02 | hivafara77 | 78 | view |
| 2021-01-07 | shyamforever | 89 | view |
| 2020-11-12 | Arshdeepmondair | 89 | view |
| 2020-11-02 | Shivangip | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I found an advert regarding a vacancy in Alex Enterprises, one of the most presti...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...on Excel and Microsoft PowerPoint which Im pretty sure you are pro at. Is it not a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74641148325 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08928661106 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1266331336 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 99.2 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300590781964 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109365847521 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425052904317 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163462577019 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446999382139 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.