You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is James and I have a Visa card ending 84123 issued by your bank. There are some entries / transactions which I do not recognize in my credit card statement for the month of June and I would like to have them removed.

There are 4 transactions of value ranging from $600 to $800 from Equifax. I have never ordered any products or services from this company. As you can see from my credit card history, I usually make purchases worth less than $200. Moreover, I did some research on Google on Equifax. It turns out Equifax is infamous for charging people’s credit card without their consent.

I request to have all charges related to Equifax removed from my account as soon as possible. Furthermore, my credit card number is probably compromised since they were able to charge it 4 times. Please lock my current card and send me a new card with a different credit card number.

Please take action upon my request.

Thank you for your support.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

James

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49343330412 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1061518181 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256062587913 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883627755149 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625392608998 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134033953487 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679763306927 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.