You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping centre has cheap second-hand furniture.
Wrtite to the shop owner. In your letter,
• Describe what you need
• Ask whether they have these items
• What they cost
Dear Sir or Madam
I am a new renter in 11th flat in the Bobur street. My friend has told me that your shop is so much cheap for shopping in the shopping centre. I need some furniture for my new flat. I am writing to you to buy something and to know about their prises. I am going to buy a table, four chairs, a cupboard, a wardrobe and a bed. I want them to be appropriate for the flat. That is to say, furniture must be suitable for every room their colour and size. The size of the table is one metre wide and one metre and 20 centimetr length and its colour is brown. The bed must be a single bed and its colour must be brown, too. Please , send me the prise of the furnture by the telegramm. I look forward to your prompt response.
Your faithfully,
Muxlisa .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m I am a new renter in 11th flat in the Bobur street. My friend has told me tha...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...flat in the Bobur street. My friend has told me that your shop is so much cheap ...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mething and to know about their prises. I am going to buy a table, four chairs, a...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...airs, a cupboard, a wardrobe and a bed. I want them to be appropriate for the fla...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd its colour must be brown, too. Please , send me the prise of the furnture by th...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ur must be brown, too. Please , send me the prise of the furnture by the telegramm. I loo...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your prompt response. Your faithfully, Muxlisa .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t response. Your faithfully, Muxlisa .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 615.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04605263158 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23995857189 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6371593946 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.25 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14302988598 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484811530272 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720997059896 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140150799984 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.32 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.89 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.