You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping centre has cheap second-hand furniture.Write to the shop owner describing:what items do you need?Asking whether they have these itemswhat is the c

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You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping centre has cheap second-hand furniture.

Write to the shop owner describing:

what items do you need?
Asking whether they have these items
what is the cost.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to enquire about couple of furniture item for my house. One of my friend suggested me to reach out to your company for any kind of Furniture on low price with best in quality. I have recently migrated in Toronto from India with my family. I might have to adjust my list accordingly as few of my personal item was shipped from India.

I have need of one king size bed, two children bunk along with mattresses for all in my apartment. Additionally, one dining table i would need, do not include chairs, owner left for us to use. I was asked to check these item on the website but unfortunately, kid’s beds and mattresses are not available.
Therefore, I would urge you to please respond me if you have these items available in your store as I can not come due to other priority work, as well as I would be grateful if, you can attach the quote along with other details while responding me. Kindly reach out to me on +1 647-888-9999.

I hope that my request will not cause too much inconvenience.

Yours faithfully,
Anshul Gupta

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rsonal item was shipped from India. I have need of one king size bed, two chi...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...artment. Additionally, one dining table i would need, do not include chairs, owne...
^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence. Yours faithfully, Anshul Gupta
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51530612245 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6391462009 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2453580564 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4545454545 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143781452315 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450054351479 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433370586306 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750858724736 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515780412547 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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