You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping centre has cheap second-hand furniture.
Write to the shop owner describing:
what items do you need?
Asking whether they have these items?
what is the cost?
Dear Sir,
Hope you are well. I am writing this epistle in reference to inquire about used furniture for my apartment since I got your reference from my friend living in the locality. let me explain in detail.
To elucidate, I have recently moved to Miltonia close Sydney and have leased out an unfurnished flat, therefore, I would need the following item for my studio apartment which includes a queen size bed, a study table, one chair and a patio along with a coffee table. Additionally, I need a shoe cabinet which needs to be waterproof as I will keep it outside in the garden. May I know if you have the stock of these items in your store and what would be the delivery timeline for the furniture? Although I can wait for some time however I would immediately need a bed and a study table since the landlord has not provided any of these items.
Since you sell second-hand furniture I would appreciate if you could let me know the list price of goods with the applicable discount if any.
I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are well. I am writing this epi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
... from my friend living in the locality. let me explain in detail. To elucidate,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds with the applicable discount if any. I look forward to your response. Yours...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to your response. Yours faithfully Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56020942408 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57418108674 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1706815393 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199105145677 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667745294024 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702385725904 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939097691905 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722146587685 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.