Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways in which government and individuals can tackle these problems.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge.
Nowadays, it has been seen that over crowded place faces major issues than properly organised cities and country. unfortunately, metro cities have lots of drawback due to exploded population. This essay will be put forward to identify the problem and recommendation to deal with it.
Certainly, Traffic is one of the problematic situation in crowded cities, more people are buying more car which is causing congestion in city. As well as, indirect impact to the environment. For instance, Recent data shows from World transport organization, due to more people moving to developed cities from villages, the condition of traffic is going to be bad in Delhi and proposed few steps before it late. On the other hand, unemployment is untold truth of overpopulation. Many youths and people from other age are looking for job but less jobs possibly leads them to commit a crime. resulted high rate in crime.
Government should play an important role and could potentially minimize the greater impact. Development of the rural area in various sectors, such as higher education and employment opportunity along with promoting to new business starters. Recent acrtical from Public times news paper stated that Indian Government has achieved great success in decreasing 800 million population of Mumbai after opening giant factories in 10 villages. Individual would need to show their support to design the society by planning a better family. Mostly, do not go more than 2 or 1 child.
To conclude, first paragraph has addressed few issue of over crowded cities along but there are many more. However, this issue can be mitigate by doing some preventive steps which has been discussed in second paragraph from the Government and individual prospect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... properly organised cities and country. unfortunately, metro cities have lots of drawback due...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... from other age are looking for job but less jobs possibly leads them to commit a cr...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Resulted
... possibly leads them to commit a crime. resulted high rate in crime. Government shoul...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ters. Recent acrtical from Public times news paper stated that Indian Government has achie...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun issue seems to be countable; consider using: 'few issues'.
Suggestion: few issues
...conclude, first paragraph has addressed few issue of over crowded cities along but there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23487544484 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76246912622 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683274021352 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8120099494 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970175785455 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244118157851 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287783093423 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533351646988 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244002428349 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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