You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realise you had left your wallet there.
Home IELTS General Writing Task 1 Model Answer: You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realise you had left your wallet there.
Dear Anku
How are you? I am back home safely and I want to thank you for the wonderful holiday which I spent with you. I am completely feel refreshed and rejuvenated after the holidays and already I am missing your company. Today I realised that I forgot my wallet at your house.
Let me explain to you in detail, I remember when I start packing I placed it on the dressing table in your guest room and might be I forgot there because the cab arrive early and I was in hurry to catch my flight. Could you please pass that to my friend amrit. He is staying in the Travelodge hotel which is just 2 km far from your house. You can handover anytime Saturday or Sunday. I am really sorry for the inconvenience and I will be more careful in the future. I will transfer money for the cab so don't worry about the transportation fees.
we will meet again hopefully soon.
Best regards
sim
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e. I will transfer money for the cab so dont worry about the transportation fees. ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...worry about the transportation fees. we will meet again hopefully soon. Best...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3630952381 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4212000056 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1616138098 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0833333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314950310975 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105007077871 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117158214257 0.0603063233224 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177259740246 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140759861983 0.0580467560999 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e. I will transfer money for the cab so dont worry about the transportation fees. ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...worry about the transportation fees. we will meet again hopefully soon. Best...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3630952381 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4212000056 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1616138098 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0833333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314950310975 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105007077871 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117158214257 0.0603063233224 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177259740246 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140759861983 0.0580467560999 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.