Dear Sir/Mam
I am writing this letter to you with regard to my bag that I left in room number 225 in Lilo Hotel Adelaide on 27th October.
My name is John, I came to the hotel Lilo for spending my weekend on 25th October at 5:00 pm and stayed in room 225 on the second floor that was having a beautiful view of the lake outside the window.
Moreover, my bag is an Adidas brand, and its color is brown. The bag is very spacious having size 12 inches wide and long. The bag has two compartments in which I kept my personal identification cards and academic certificates along with the mobile charger.
Actually, Sunday 27th October was my returning day. I was going to be late for my flight to London and forget to carry my bag that was placed in one of the cabinets of the cupboard. After reaching my home, I found that my bag was left in the hotel room.
I want to make a request to you to send my bag through courier service at my address 9249 122 st, London, V3V 4L4. I will be responsible to pay the delivery charges.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, moreover, second, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27403846154 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35841197919 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5620493387 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244471294582 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878175735644 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740881588535 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138983608912 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740997188552 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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