You have lost and item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter-Describe the item-Explain where & when you left it-Say what action you would like the company to take

Essay topics:

You have lost and item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
- Describe the item
- Explain where & when you left it
- Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my laptop, which I mistakenly left on the train, while I was travelling from Central station to Downtown on Jan 13, 2019.

I lost a laptop of HP make, which is a model from HP3200 series. It has 15 inches screen and was in a grey sling laptop bag. Additionally, as an identification mark I have my name initials AJ on the bottom left of the gadget’s screen.

After reconfirming from my travel ticket, I missed the belonging in the C-3 coach of the train I assume I forget to pick the bag, as I in note to get down at the station considering the heavy football at the station.

In case you trace my belonging, I request you to give me a call on the suggested mobile number on the lost and found form enclosed herewith.

Looking forward for your response.

Yours faithfully
Alex Jhonson

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52866242038 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70141798584 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668789808917 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7726794258 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162707255444 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595041767577 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054966049563 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816434684832 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608728089772 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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