You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long
Dear Sir,
I am Alex Jhonson, student of North California University pursing Masters in Environmental Science. I recently saw your advertisement inviting application for unpaid community services. I am keen on joining your program and thereby sharing a few details of my work experience and interests.
The current post-graduate program that I am enrolled in, demands submission pf project work dedicated towards voluntary work performed for the benefits of the society. The assignment module has been designed with the objective to gain practical experience and understand the associated upcoming challenges, moreover derive solutions for the same. Henceforth, I am willing to take on the task.
I am confident in conversing in Hindi language, which I learnt while I was pursing my graduation on humanitarian studies. Besides the bilingual skill, I have prior experience in handling project on water restoration with focus towards resolving issues associated with irrigation.
Considering the fact that I am well-versed in Hindi language, I would prefer working in India. Additionally, the country is rain-fed, which further inclines me towards choosing the country for my intended project work. Assuming the time required for plantation and harvesting of crop, time span of 6 months will be sufficient.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Alex Jhonson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lication for unpaid community services. I am keen on joining your program and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70673076923 4.54256449028 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14773901551 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6956745716 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698908071377 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266277429037 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250379800525 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0384826975953 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157529612425 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 8.71597938144 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 7.59969072165 137% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 41.2886597938 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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