To the editor,
I am writing to you the letter to appreciate the effort you have put in for making the readers aware of the crime rate and the means to counter them. I am writing in response to your article. Allow me to elaborate.
The crime rate has increased rampantly. In addition, you had specified that it is a rare instance to hear about a crime in Staten Neighborhood. However, you would be surprised to know that in our locality there are varieties of criminal activities taking place such as theft, snatching, pick pocketing and vandalizing of property. The problems are increasing and the police authorities are not cooperating with the residents.
The representatives of our neighborhood met with the police officials and it was brought to our attention that the perpetrators are usually unemployed and drug addicts who have no means to pay for their addictions. These are the people who take the path of crime to fulfill their desires.
The need of the hour is that the police department should increase the patrolling in the residential areas and further organize awareness camps to set the path right.
I hope something can be done about the issue, before it goes out of hands.
Yours faithfully
Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.004784689 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84001018264 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.175702827 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209194796786 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715294530285 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547539703625 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835225998579 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704020849497 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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