You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Sharmistha Naskar, am an existing student of Dune University in Computer Application department. I am writing this letter to inform you regarding an unfortunate loss of my student identification card.
Day before yesterday, I was traveling from university to a shopping mall with friends since there was some special offer going on for Dune University on some snacks and activities. We planned to avail that to enjoy the weekend together. Post that while entering to the university, I noticed that I lost my card. Hence, I had to manually complete the entry form at security point and hostel entrance to get in.
Since from Monday we have two crucial classes to attend where we must use the card to access those rooms i.e. library and practical rooms. Apart from this, end of the week we have seminar as well where I will be presenting a documentary of my recent research paper.
I accept that I should have taken care of the card. Please accept my apologies and I can assure you that I shall keep this in mind in future. However, I am requesting you to allow me a temporary card as of now and requesting to issue a new card as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...sure you that I shall keep this in mind in future. However, I am requesting you to allow ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66019417476 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70391399819 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7334022038 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258206684267 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914700665716 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929634429492 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15097693278 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888069820124 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.