You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letterAdvise them of your situationExplain how this is affecting youRequest a new card

Essay topics:

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
Advise them of your situation
Explain how this is affecting you
Request a new card

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to report the loss of my university identification card without which I am facing issues.

I used to bring my identification card to university daily. However, a few days ago, I noticed that it was missing. I am positive that I had it in my possession this Monday and I believe I must have misplaced it then.

The lack of student identification is making it difficult for me to issue any book from the library. Furthermore, I am also unable to return books I have borrowed without a student identification which has resulted in a substantial fine. Additionally, I am unable to participate or attend events occurring at the university without said identification.

I am in urgent need of my university identification. I request you to please reissue my university identification. I understand that this process could take anywhere from 20 to 30 business days. I would be much obliged if you could make an exception and expedite the process.

Hoping for a favourable response.

Yours sincerely,

Praneet K Nadar

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e reissue my university identification. I understand that this process could take...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e anywhere from 20 to 30 business days. I would be much obliged if you could make...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02824858757 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38158129981 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5612758717 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4615384615 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196931121528 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637450122419 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453360142592 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914756811062 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360782500012 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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