you have moved to new house and are planning to hold a party worried about the noises may disturb your neighbors
Write a letter to neighbor
Introduce yourself
Plans of party
Invite him
Dear Smith,
Hello! I, Palki, new in the society. I bought a flat adjacent to yours last week. Actually, me and my husband want to celebrate this happiness of owning house with some near ones.
We are working professionals so all our friends arr seeking a treat from us. And we planned to throw a party in our apartment. The party we decided is going to be a Goa theme party so no formal attire needed. Moreover, we have booked a band for live performance, for which I am little anxious and hoping that music disruptions could be bearable for a day. I also have some barbecue in the list.
I cordially invite you and your family to join us for the occasion. As this will also give us a chance to get familiar. I hope you accept my invitation and details of the party is as below:
Venue: Next to your door
Date and time: 2,Dec at 8:00pm
With warm regards
Pallivi
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| 2019-09-21 | astrlw@hotmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2017-12-01 | Palki | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our family to join us for the occasion. As this will also give us a chance to get ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and details of the party is as below: Venue: Next to your door D...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow: Venue: Next to your door Date and time: 2,Dec at 8:00pm With w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me: 2,Dec at 8:00pm With warm regards Pallivi
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40490797546 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40669146338 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1790122566 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2727272727 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127829014621 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473536346586 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309671033321 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589177375686 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306815968314 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.