You have organized to go on holidays with your friend - However , you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter;
tell him how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
Explain why you must change your plans.
Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Sara,
I hope you are doing well. I was planning to write you about my change in plan to the holiday destination which we organized last month. As you know government has called an emergency in country therefore, essential services like hospitals are made high alert to not allow any doctor off during this period.
I am hoping for situation to get better so, that we could plan another holiday as this time I was so elated that, I would be able to go on vacation with you after so long and we would have best time together, but due to unseen circumstances we possibly have to now plan it for later
However, I have my annual leaves saved, which I can utilize in December. I believe you will be having your winter vacations too at that time of the year so, how about we go to Northern areas to witness snow and some more fun activities.
Hoping to hear from you
Best wishes
Haya
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| 2019-07-01 | Faisal Mushtaq | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...ion with you after so long and we would have best time together, but due to unseen circum...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aved, which I can utilize in December. I believe you will be having your winter v...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4578313253 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3579393687 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686746987952 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.092167462 44.8134815571 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204237423263 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105123173713 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385583929415 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127610220128 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314049723854 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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