You have a pen friend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country.
Briefly describe one news story that has been on TV, or the radio, or in the newspaper in your country and explain why people are interested in it.
Dear Sam,
I am writing this letter to answer your letter that you sent me last week. It was a bit surprised when I read that you asked the prime news nowadays in my country.
Well, recently, there is a lot of things going on but the considerate news that everyone concern is about the coming election. Every political party in a hurry and trying various mean to get the voters vote and trust. Mainly, they are doing the seminar in which by telling their agendas, capture the attention of voters on their site. The main social media is Television for their party promotion also the banners are placed in every street with their written agendas and their election mark.
People are very keen to this election because the previous government had failed to fulfil their promises even the public choose them twice. Every national want a leader who neither fulfils his promise and also work for the betterment and development for their country.
Hope our country get a leader like Muhammad Ali Jinnah.
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89204545455 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27572955108 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693181818182 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8627645805 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104234540961 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482275309083 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459163064548 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590555320999 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397838639269 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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