A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets a lot of excercise and avoid stress.
What do people do to stay healthy in your country?
Health is wealth. There is a believe that a human who gets all the nutrition, doing daily workout and get rid of his anxiety by any means fits as a flea. In this essay, I’ll explain all the work that has been done by my national people to stay in pink.
First of all, in the morning, the men go for pray than go to their area park and garden where children & woman are already present. The older people prefer to do light exercises like brisk walking but the adult people want to do hard or physically tough exercises somewhat weight lifting, squatting, push-ups etc. Children always playing around with their toys or with the games that park council already placed for them. Girls like swings where younger boys are good at swimming or wrestling.
Secondly, the meal they are having are full of nutrition for example, yogurt, eggs, milk, butter, bread, almonds and nuts in the breakfast to start a healthy day. But, nowadays, junk food is very handy and younger ones like it a lot that is harming the health situation of so many people in my country. People seem to give advice on healthy eating out not recommending their-self in, still these habits are not adopted by the people except one third population
A stressful environment in every office can be seen for instance, deadlines for shipments has to be met in time, sales workers has to achieve their targets and so on but some people are keen to get away all their worries by doing some yoga or meditation or spending time with their family members.
In the nutshell, people are taking care their health with nutritious food and mind relaxing exercise to cope with their anxiety and also some physical exercise to get going with their healthy body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Health is wealth. There is a believe that a human who gets all the nutrition...
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Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
Health is wealth. There is a believe that a human who gets all the nutrition...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to start a healthy day. But, nowadays, junk food is very handy and younger ones...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, as to, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67326732673 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26689371894 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620462046205 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.417929464 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17663298198 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579668804195 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474682989957 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094942875351 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251891211504 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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