You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:•Greet your friend and say why you are writing.•Briefly describe a news story.
Hello Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds in good health and mental peace. Since you mentioned about your interest in recent news trends in India, I can you give you a brief insight about the few of the major issues which are affecting large population.
First of all, most of the political parties are actively endorsing their agenda over almost all forms of media as parliament elections are around the corner. You can follow daily debates by various candidates on some famous news channels, such as AajTak TV. By looking at popularity, in my opinion, Janta Dal party is leading the battle so far while other opponents are struggling very badly. Secondly, there is a huge debate ongoing regarding women safety, especially in metro cities where the number of rape cases are increasing these days. So, people are furious with the governments because of their inability to establish a proper law and order.
These are the major affairs which are affecting a large crowd. I can refer you to a media expert if you need to carry out further investigation.
I hope this information will be of some use to you and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80676328502 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46073508487 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690821256039 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8214270896 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162154101016 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485558127906 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612269888613 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10254556465 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772516577817 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.