You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:explain why you are writingexpress concern about

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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you regarding the acknowledgement of recipient my new HDFC credit card. Although I received my courier packet on last Monday, the card was missing from the packet. Fortunately, I made a video while opening the packet so that I could keep it as a memory.

This is a serious disappointment from a bank like HDFC. I have never expected such kind of mismanagement from your bank. There might be a possibility that some had stolen my card from the courier.

My request you to immediately block my card without any delay and ask for investigation for this issue. Do not take this concern lightly as someone’s hard earning may be on stack and this card might be misused. Moreover, we should implement a double-check method before sending as document or package to you client by your quality team.

Hope you will take prompt action and will not get such repetition in future.

Yours faithfully,
Bibhu

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...action and will not get such repetition in future. Yours faithfully, Bibhu
^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n in future. Yours faithfully, Bibhu
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, regarding, so, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86335403727 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89662165917 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701863354037 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0957896763 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1818181818 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289015741418 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102445132821 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566074831397 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151040414442 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067272864498 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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