Your friend's son is going to your country for his holiday, she want him to stay in your home. But you can't accommodate him. Write letter for your friend.
In the letter, you should:
• apology to your friend
• explain why he cannot stay in your home
• give her suggestion for her son arrangement during his holiday
Dear Sujan,
I am extremely happy to receive a letter from you after a long time. I hope you and your family are well. However, I deeply regret that I will not able to accommodate you son, Ravi, in my house during his upcoming visit to India. I wish I could have accommodated your son in my apartment.
As you know, I am staying alone in India and I have to travel to another city due to some official work during that period. Moreover, I am going to renovate my house during my absence as I have given a contract to an interior designer. Otherwise, I could have handed of my room keys to your son. I tried to postpone my renovation work, but contractor denied clearly.
Instead, I can arrange his accommodation in one of my friend’s house as he will be travelling with me and his house will be empty during that period. I have already asked him about this possibility and he agreed upon it. I will make sure your son’s pleasant stay in city even though I will not present.
Hope, you will be happy with my changes and do not worry about his safety.
Regards,
Bibhu Kalita
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45544554455 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55349586705 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7085506807 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2307692308 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225303455131 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876543199488 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731296277182 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137916109074 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075870131605 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.