You have received a letter from your friend who has recently decided to move to your city. Your friend has asked if he/ she can stay with you for two weeks while they look for a place to live.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- explain you are happy for him/her to stay with you
- tell your friend you can help him/her look for a new place to live
- suggest some activities that you can do together
Hello Dave,
How're you ? I've been feeling happy ever since I read your letter. It's good to know that at last you will be relocating to my city and we'll be reuniting once again. You know we've departed for so long, therefore having you in my home will bring so much joy to me.
Fortunately, I'm very familiar with the neighborhood, so I can use my influence to search and secure a comfortable apartment for you. There are a few good ones that my realtor can offer us. You don't have to worry, for I'll do the running around. Just let me know your preferred choice.
As you're thinking about your house preferences, I'll be putting together some activities that we can be catching fun with. Do you still enjoy playing video games ? We can be competing with that when your'e around. We might even go camping in the park, should you get bored of playing PlayStation. There are so much fun activities that we can do together here!
Anyways, please let me know when you'll be coming so I can prepare for your arrival.
Your friend,
Pete
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
Hello Dave, Howre you ? Ive been feeling happy ever since I read yo...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
... well be reuniting once again. You know weve departed for so long, therefore having ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ring so much joy to me. Fortunately, Im very familiar with the neighborhood, so...
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Line 6, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... ones that my realtor can offer us. You dont have to worry, for Ill do the running a...
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Line 6, column 218, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...n offer us. You dont have to worry, for Ill do the running around. Just let me know...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... me know your preferred choice. As youre thinking about your house preferences, ...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... thinking about your house preferences, Ill be putting together some activities tha...
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Line 9, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...es ? We can be competing with that when youre around. We might even go camping in th...
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Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... go camping in the park, should you get bored of playing PlayStation. There are so much ...
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Line 11, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...re! Anyways, please let me know when youll be coming so I can prepare for your arr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, so, still, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55319148936 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40795081902 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.618139012 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1428571429 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32946554392 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125906030098 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790778195949 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181574368085 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289896393195 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.