You have recently attended a two-day course, and now the course organizer is asking for your review and comments. Write a letter to the course organizer.
In your letter, you should:
describe the course
explain whether or not you liked the course, and why
provide some suggestions for improvement.
Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of review and feedback since you have asked after the completion of the data modeling course with the Weka tool.
This two-day course has taught us the importance of data modeling that is essential while working with data and finding business insights. Also, it is helpful to present new ideas to clients while working as a freelancer or with a big firm in the field of a data analyst.
There is no doubt in saying that learning and taking sessions of this two-day course has improved our clear concept of data modeling. Without data modeling, a data analyst is unable to judge and understand the data. So, it is essential to study data modeling and its statistical concepts which have been covered in this course.
However, there is one flaw which I would like to discuss and found about this course that it has covered other tools for data modeling such as Python, R, and Excel. Every tool is used in industry but Python is holding a majority because of its useful libraries. Therefore, I would request you to please add Python to this course. I understand the days will rise up but this course will give fruitful benefits to upcoming students and it will gain popularity in the market. In this way, both students and you will be getting benefits from this course.
I am hoping that you will be considering my suggestion and adding the content to this two-day data modeling course.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-06 | RajatSharma1 | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, while, as to, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75769230769 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39161194434 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.2750865253 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201532050307 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784340681175 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711060017248 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130121835972 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798797746301 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.