You have a full time job and you are also doing a part time evening course You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your tutor In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you

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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you will take

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be discontinuing the part-time Oracle database administrator evening course which I have enrolled recently in your prestigious institution.

I have been attending the course for the past few days, and it is very informative and extremely helpful to build my skills as an Oracle Database Architect. However, I have to discontinue the course due to conflicts in my work schedules.

I am currently working as a database analyst in Oracle corporation. I was recently assigned to a new project for a prominent Asian client. The project is expected to be last for six months. I expected to work extended hours during this period which is convenient for my client. As a result, I will have to attend the important meetings between 3 pm to 9 pm. Therefore, I will not be able to attend classes in the evenings because the class starts at 5 pm.

I am aware that you give a long time break to your students in order to complete their work whether they are working professional or college pupils. I will be grateful if you will consider me to retake the batch after six months. Besides, it would be great to start with a fresh batch and I assure you that I will be completing the course after coming back to school.

I hope you will consider my request and understand the current situation.

Yours faithfully,
Shain

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, therefore, as a result, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72427983539 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81258183997 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.193249794 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227862764645 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745323170353 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816269647744 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146825126167 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106243398912 0.0580467560999 183% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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