You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time.
• say how you felt about the visit
• refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her
• invite your friend to visit you
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Karen,
How are you? I am writing to inform you that I thoroughly enjoyed my holiday at your place. Even though we caught up after almost a decade, our fondness for each other still remains intact. Moreover, I was very excited to meet you, yet emotional because of the significantly long gap.
Let me list down some of the activities that I enjoyed. Firstly, the early morning trek, which although was very tiring, witnessing the picturesque view and breathtaking landscape made it worthwhile. It reminded me of the time when we were young and would undertake adventures together. Secondly, the quality time we spent together preparing lunch and dinner. Do you remember we first meet in culinary school and hence, cooking is an integral part of our friendship! Reminiscing the past, indulging in our favorite activity was the highlight of my trip.
Finally, I would like to host to you and your family at my home during the Christmas holidays. Please consider this as an invitation to spend some time with me and reciprocate the gratitude.
I look forward to your reply and keep in touch.
Your friend,
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ificantly long gap. Let me list down some of the activities that I enjoyed. Firstly, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70536555202 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5897804515 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3076923077 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216011669986 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746666846798 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057675831376 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113951102319 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792945812055 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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