You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper Write a letter to the company and say what position you are applying to and where it was advertised In your letter include some information about your skills education and experience Explain why

Essay topics:

You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the company and say what position you are applying to and where it was advertised.
In your letter, include some information about your skills, education and experience. Explain why you are interested in this job.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apply for a job position in your firm which I had seen in yesterday's newspaper on the jobs advertisements page number five.

As I check, you have opened a multiple position for Data Engineering roles because of your upcoming governmental projects. And, you require Data Engineers to lead those new projects as it will be beneficial for the growth of your company.

Recently, I have completed my master's in the Data Engineering from Indian Institute of Technology in Delhi. And, I was searching for jobs in the same profile over the past few days. Fortunately, I saw your job advertisement on Times of India newspaper and I would like to apply for the same position. Plus, in the job description you mentioned about the upcoming projects related to the banking industries in our country which is one of mine favorite domains. Therefore, I have a very keen interest to work with your company for such kind of opportunity where I can apply my skills and gain a real industry experience. I have attached my resume with this letter. Please consider me for the interview selection for the vacancy of Data Engineering in your organization.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91627906977 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89711816677 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8035386698 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0833333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30127323173 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105998512859 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542681837246 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172951096331 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715848030942 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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