You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. Recently, I have been facing troubles while attending evening classes of the Oracle Database course at your prestigious institution.
The reason behind facing problems while attending classes is due to my busy schedule at work. I have been working late after attending the classes at your school due to new projects came in my firm. I am not able to a single minute of leisure time to enjoy my life for the past few days. Due to this, I am unable to focus on the class lessons which I took to upgrade my skills and to become proficient as an Oracle database consultant. Presently, it is affecting the performance of my work, therefore, I would be discontinuing from this course for some time because I have to give priority to my job since it is the only source of income in my family.
Once my daily schedule will be back to normal, I will be coming back to take the rest of the sessions as you conduct every new badge monthly. I hope you will understand my current situation and would offer me a grant for leaving in the middle of the course.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56696428571 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58398086505 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575892857143 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6892310659 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207107990128 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810849749287 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470071779297 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13655525656 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630371379308 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.