A wide amount of individual on their own respective profession such as doctors and teachers are going aboard to work in a develop country than their country of origin. meaning a lesser and unskilled professional will be left behind.
To start with certain career of oriented people will look for more opportunities abroad this will drastically result to the decease in number of skilled individual , who can render service to their own country . for example if the demand of doctors and nurses are wanted in the USA, CANADA, so they will trends to grab such opportunities to work there. consequently the quality of nurses and doctors, available in their own county will be decline. Leaving unskilled professionals will be left behind
Furthermore, working outside one's country of origin can be avoided by upgrading the salaries and more infrastructural facilities. The government of that particular county has the power to assign and allocate such. by additional budget for the public services professionals . The amount of work they are providing should deserve a well paid compensation and must be offer with promising benefits , such as health security and shelter .Teachers too must be well pad by the administration to ensure the quality of education that are giving to their students.
In conclusion even though skill and educated workforce trends to find better opportunities abroad that may lead in reducing their number to provide service this can still be solve by increasing their salaries, infrastructural facilities and improving the government mandatory benefit for them . Meaning innumerable of these social group would remain and offer quality and better service to their community as large .
- Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist To what extent do you agree 94
- You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letterexplain why you have moveddescribe the new houseinvite your friend to come and visit 56
- Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what Extant do you agree? 61
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? 73
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consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34074074074 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97022789163 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3096351168 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.090909091 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 85.0 5.01903807615 1694% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197926978771 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724828712627 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607671878252 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128474382263 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321793226249 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.