Dear Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well. I'am writing to tell you that I left LA to San Jose. I also settled down here. I hope you can come to my place for visiting next month
As you knew, I graduated from University this May. Fortunately I got a job at San Jose last month. I left my previous apartment and sold lots of my daily stuff on Craglist since the new flat is much smaller than I rented in LA. I shared living room and bathroom with my workmates, only having a small bedroom. You know this is a difficult start for me as new graduates starting career in this place, I need to make every peny count.
If you have time free next month, I would like to invite you for coming to visit my small flat. Besides, we can hang out for driving on the route No.1. I am sure that you will enjoy the sunlights and beaches there. I am looking forward you reply.
Yours sincererly,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come to my place for visiting next month As you knew, I graduated from University...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21387283237 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19156725244 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3738915873 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.75 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201112796115 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737353477424 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057239077536 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137953179124 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438231997999 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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