You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Mark,
How have you been? Congratulation on your wedding and sorry that I could not make it as I had cold on that particular day. You must be enjoying your new life with your better half, right? Have you booked any tickets for honeymoon, if not that it would a gift from my side.
Last week, I have shifted to a new place at sector 13, as you know my earlier place was quite far from office and my impression towards my manager was very bad since I always got stuck in traffic and failed to reach office on time.
However, my new place is just beside our office and it takes only 5 to 10 minutes to reach, that too by walking, unlike my previous place from where I used to travel to office at least for an hour. Well, it is not only the reason that I shifted here but the flat is indeed a nice place to stay. It has 3 bedrooms along with one big hall. 3 attached bathroom in each rooms. Moreover, I always had a wish to have a modular kitchen and finally I got one too. All the 3 rooms has its own balconies which is again decorated with flower pots. The best part of my flat is the terrace we have a alluring swimming pool covered with carpet grasses. From now on wards, we do not have to book any other site to have a pool party.
In India, we follow various rituals on every occasions, such as while buying a new car or a house. So, this Friday in order to follow the rituals we have organised an event . I would be grateful if you could join us on 29th April at 10 in the morning along with your wife.
Looking forward to seeing you at the event. Thanks in anticipation.
With Regards
Simi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 587, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... part of my flat is the terrace we have a alluring swimming pool covered with car...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...w the rituals we have organised an event . I would be grateful if you could join u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, at least, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 314.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15923566879 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16389671186 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7072088191 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7368421053 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181890050677 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556504829562 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514511583921 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111295067813 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666389283845 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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