In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
A curfew is declared in a few areas of the US wherein after a particular time at night, the juveniles are allowed to go outside only when they are accompanied with adults. I will discuss in this essay if it is right or wrong in my further paragraphs before forming an opinion at the end.
To embark on, the kidnapping and other threats like child trafficking, murder are getting increased day-by-day. Certainly, in such areas teenagers should not go alone instead they should go with elders. But, do you think going with an adult can help them? What if the offender attacks the teenager as well as the adult? What if the offender has gun or sword? Will it be possible for normal people to escape from such situations?
In my opinion, the police along with government should take the responsibility to handle such situation and should be proactive. Firstly, all the areas should be under surveillance, so fix as much as close circuit cameras as possible. Secondly, police patrolling should be given on hourly basis. Finally, the offenders should be hanged till death so that one would think thousand times before doing any such crime.
To conclude, as mentioned in my last paragraph, police and government should take some other steps such as strengthen the surveillance and stringent punishment should be announced to the criminals, instead of imposing "curfew".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...nged till death so that one would think thousand times before doing any such crime. ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00869565217 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86778600969 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639130434783 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0481115619 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6153846154 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254136152265 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082160923033 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071515628997 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156595662573 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840861332827 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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