You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter•Explain why you have moved•Describe the new house•Invite your friend to come and visit

Essay topics:

You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit

Hello John,

I hope you are doing great. I have been busy lately with my job search and did not get time to speak to you. Finally I have found the job in westminister area and have moved to the neighbourhood near to my workplace. The main reason to move is to stay near to the office. By doing so, the commute to the office becomes easy and in addition I can help my wife and kids in a timely manner if they need me.

I have bought a three bedroom, two bathroom house in a very good locality. As the house in newly built it has big windows that help in getting a good amount of sunlight during the day. The bedrooms are spacious and there is plenty of room even after keeping king-sized beds. The extra space makes the stay in the rooms little more pleasant. The house is two block away from the kids' school and is two minutes drive from Park Meadows shopping centre.

I am planning to do a house-warming party and would love to have you. I would like to invite you along with your family to the party. I will be sending the formal party details soon.

Looking forward to seeing you soon.

warm Regards
Anuraag

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...h and did not get time to speak to you. Finally I have found the job in westminister ar...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o stay near to the office. By doing so, the commute to the office becomes easy and in addit...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...in addition I can help my wife and kids in a timely manner if they need me. I have bought a thr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...ve bought a three bedroom, two bathroom house in a very good locality. As the house i...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bathroom house in a very good locality. As the house in newly built it has big win...
^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...stay in the rooms little more pleasant. The house is two block away from the kids s...
^^^
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'block' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'blocks'.
Suggestion: blocks
... little more pleasant. The house is two block away from the kids school and is two mi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou along with your family to the party. I will be sending the formal party detail...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
... Looking forward to seeing you soon. warm Regards Anuraag
^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing you soon. warm Regards Anuraag
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30516431925 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18306325379 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1352506765 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1333333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204942284643 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619631002964 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588230390179 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114888538968 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517100447484 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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