You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Priya,
hope this letter brings you good health and well. it's been long time since we met and talk with each other. I'm writing to let you know that I have shifted to new house in Dubai on last month.
The home which I was staying had lot of problems. You probably do not know it was a studio type flat which doesn't have bedroom and separate kitchen. also, my son has grown up now and he is not finding enough space to play as all his things are in the living room along with our bed. In addition, we often get issues with the air-conditioner and it's already informed to the owner several times but there were no response from them. Due to this concerns we shifted our home to another apartment near to the old one.
The new house is more spacious, which has one bedroom with attached bathroom, large living room, medium kitchen with well equipped electronic items and a balcony to see the spectacular view of the city.
I would like to invite you to come to our new home along with your family for my son's birthday which is on October 21st. I would be incredibly happy if you can able to make your vacation during this time, so that you can also able to meet our family members and we all can have memorable time.
I hope to see you soon in the function.
Best regards,
Saru
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...letter brings you good health and well. its been long time since we met and talk wi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... since we met and talk with each other. Im writing to let you know that I have shi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ot know it was a studio type flat which doesnt have bedroom and separate kitchen. also...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...esnt have bedroom and separate kitchen. also, my son has grown up now and he is not ...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...here were no response from them. Due to this concerns we shifted our home to another...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we shifted our home to another apartment near to the old one. The new house is...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d we all can have memorable time. I hope to see you soon in the function. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33606557377 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11750044064 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4822877983 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3846153846 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167761171011 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576810966938 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613550849605 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969362284931 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604225326889 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.