You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house
Hi John,
I am writing to inform you about my new house in your district. My family has already settled there, but they don't seem to feel at home in the neighborhood.
My new house is not as large as yours, but more than enough for six people. It has a pool, garage and small garden, where both my children and mother-in-law enjoy to spend time in. My wife is getting used to a spacious kitchen and still entirely occupied by placing our furniture from the old apartment, because it all is stuck with chairs on the first floor. Moreover, my new neighbors appear to be friendly, but we don't know them very well yet. Fortunately, my house is not far from the bus stop, so my children can commute to the local school easily, which is considered the best in the region
My wife asks me to invite you and your spouse to our house for a small party in order to celebrate the relocation. While our wives will be talking in the living room, I will show you the garden as well as the garage. I am looking forward to your reply asap.
Best wishes,
Tolegen.
- Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform? 78
- These days people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life What are the advantages and disadvantages of this 56
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss. 84
- Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ily has already settled there, but they dont seem to feel at home in the neighborhoo...
^^^^
Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy spending'.
Suggestion: enjoy spending
...here both my children and mother-in-law enjoy to spend time in. My wife is getting used to a s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...neighbors appear to be friendly, but we dont know them very well yet. Fortunately, m...
^^^^
Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to your reply asap. Best wishes, Tolegen.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40404040404 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34285193912 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2609842331 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138270956487 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595222215535 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798311240722 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122901588758 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684982367848 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.