You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also help with some activities. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say
– How would you be able to help?
– When and why would you do it?
– Who will help you to do it?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my willingness to assist in the renovation of Sault High School, which was advertised on the school’s notice board.
Professionally, I am an Ontario certified carpenter with more than 5 years of experience in furniture making. During my visit to the school, I have seen that numerous class’ doors, as well as benches, need repairs that is something I can certainly help with. In addition, you are also organising a blood donation camp, and I would like to help in its organisation as I have handled such events in my company and can assure you to render my best services.
I am available all day during the weekends, so I can carry out the repair work during that time. Since I have been born and brought up here, I feel a sense of responsibility towards my community. This is the primary reason behind my desire to volunteer. Apart from this, by doing such selfless acts, I derive immense pleasure that is another reason why I look forward to helping in the renovation work of the school.
I have many friends just like me who are interested in giving back to society and are carpenters as well. Because the building is huge, I am confident with my some helping hands we will be able to finish the classroom repairs before the school starts on Monday.
Please respond at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, apart from, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79253112033 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76369106932 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655601659751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0105544416 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304691794051 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852678090163 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078129309197 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136378361752 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797628666254 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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