You have rented an apartment and neighbours are disturbing. Write a letter to your land lord explaining
• what problem it is
• what did you do to solve the problem
• what action you want the owner to take
Dear Mr Jones,
I am a tenant in your apartment situated at Whitefield. This letter is to tell about the issues facing by me due to the bad activities of the neighbours.
Last month, some youngsters occupied one of your apartments which is next to ours. They look decent and professional besides they were well-mannered. They stated to conduct parties with loud music and frequent visitors visit at night, but was in tolerable level. However, gradually the situation became worsen in such a way that parties were routine with alcohol and drugs addition to that extreme loud music which disturbed our nights.
Since my father is a heart patient who need adequate sleep and rest, due to theses antisocial activities, disturbed our peaceful life<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> </span>. They did not hear to our problems hence, we complained to the building association members, through them to police. The authorities came for further enquiry and warned the neighbours. After the complaint they were silent for few days but, they stared parties again which is causing nuisance to us.
Even after police complaint they did not respect our request. This compelled me to write this letter to inform the situation. It would be better if you could make them to vacate the house with immediate action.
I hope you understood my concern. Awaiting for a quick action in this matter.
Yours faithfully
Sd-/
Name.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Jones, I am a tenant in your apartment situated...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n which is causing nuisance to us. Even after police complaint they did not respect o...
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Line 19, column 35, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...n. I hope you understood my concern. Awaiting for a quick action in this matter. You...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91429137311 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5485017363 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5625 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102153245614 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358236409752 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036174939503 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650518891188 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389284848814 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.