Dear Sir or Madam ;
I am writing this letter to express my interest about your recent advertisement in local magazine I am living in Australia since two years ago and I am a study child care in National University I am very Interest to take care of children because they are very innocent and a smart especially in age 6.
Although, I am a study in university I have lots of free time to spend with your children, so I can help your children to learn science subject in addition I have experience in working with children Because are used to be a kindergarten teacher and I know how to take care of them.
However, I am a student in university but this semester I have free time to work on my proposal so spending time with your kid could be wonderful experience for both of us And I have just two classes this semester so I can stay with your children five days a week and I hope you except me in your family.
I am waiting for your answering.
sincerely yours
Sogol Hassani
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...ing for your answering. sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31351351351 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61767783596 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.44721803 44.8134815571 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.6 76.5299724578 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.0 16.8248392259 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138432030247 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802263445867 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029461212622 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916538410908 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218121722118 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 8.37731958763 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.31 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.