You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
say which advertisement you are answering
describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear John,
This is in response to your recent advertisement about the need for a night teacher in your community college. I had seen this advert on 22/08/2019 in the Herald newspaper.
I would like to take up Business Communications classes for the working-class employees. This is a very good opportunity for salesmen, call centre executives and shop vendors to join this 8 weeks course. Here, I will be able to teach them how to speak business English proficiently. This will help them to thrive in their workplaces as they will be able to interact freely with customers or clients and clarify their doubts with clear-cut explanations about the advantages in the products they are selling. Similarly, they will be able to suggest on the spot resolutions in case of a complaint e.g. insurance agents will be able to explain every detail and loopholes in the contract by the use of technical jargon from the curriculum.
I am applying with alacrity, meaning, with speed and eagerness to fill in this job role because I am very sure that students will easily understand my pedagogy composed of lectures, notes and computer learning. This is a lucrative; a profitable idea which will make your college more reputable.
I have enclosed a demonstration session in this email.
Faithfully,
Jack Dan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., if, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09677419355 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95069811745 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5717335688 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126430463915 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525605729232 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773360997873 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901214533573 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838295615394 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.