Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information ,such as their hobbies and interests ,and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the job interview the managements often query about the personal details like hobbies and interests. Few believe that personal information is inter related with the profession and meaningful. However, other does not hold the same notion. In my opinion, the profession and personal life is somehow mixed and moreover, it depend on the person how to accept that condition.
Firstly, majority of personal questions requested by the examiner are related to the profession. It varies from the post to post. For an illustration, the person applying for the job of night shift will be asked the question about his or her marriage as the management would prefer to appoint the bachelor employee. Thus, it is sufficient to provide details up to certain limit and it sometimes help the candidate to grab the opportunity for example. running as a hobby can help the competitor to secure position of emergency evacuation controller. I personally believe that asking personal questions can bridge a bond between employer and employee, which is beneficial for both.
Secondly, some does not prefer to share their private life as they think it is kind of discrimination for asking questions like religion, which shows biasedness from the employer. Furthermore, they prefer not to disclose their personal life as it makes them uncomfortable and things can have negative impacts on their profession.
In conclusion, I agree with the point of view, intervening with the private life of an individual up to some level during the question hour can help the candidate as well as employer to have good relationship for the future. Albeit, others wants to keep their professional and personal life completely segregated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interred'.
Suggestion: interred
...ew believe that personal information is inter related with the profession and meaning...
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Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
... life is somehow mixed and moreover, it depend on the person how to accept that condit...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'asked' instead.
Suggestion: asked
...ying for the job of night shift will be asked the question about his or her marriage as the manage...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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...e negative impacts on their profession. In conclusion, I agree with the point of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21818181818 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90555694438 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0523940553 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231929251623 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746585780324 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472496398678 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13311310075 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352081529616 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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