You have a spare room in your apartment, you would like to rent out to a college student. Write a letter to student accommodation officer of local college.
In your letter include:
Where it is
Explain about the room
To which type of student you would like to give.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the availability of a spare room in my apartment which I am interested in renting out to a college student.
My apartment is located just a km away from your college to the opposite side of the City light bus stop. The perfect address is 26, Murlidhar Residency, City light road, Surat 305001. Since the apartment has a big gate at the entrance, it is easily visible from the bus stop.
We are three members in a family and the apartment has three rooms, two on the ground floor and one on the first floor. Since we rarely use the first-floor room which has a separate entry, we would like to rent it out to a college student. The room has an attached toilet, a balcony, television and all the basic facilities required for an academic student.
Because we have a pet in our apartment, we would like an individual who is comfortable with it. Moreover, it will be beneficial for us if the desired student is jovial, open to the new culture, does not smokes and wishes to live like an extended family member.
If you have any other queries, I can be reached on 456(58589) or at abc@gmail.com.
Yours faithfully
John Patel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in renting out to a college student. My apartment is located just a km away f...
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Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is easily visible from the bus stop. We are three members in a family and the...
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Line 17, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'smoke'
Suggestion: smoke
...vial, open to the new culture, does not smokes and wishes to live like an extended fam...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65727699531 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64744610582 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2146949764 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1818181818 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279205631447 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899334951694 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852703229012 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14088773806 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888231363924 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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