You have stayed at a friend’s house last weekend. you think you have probably left your watch there
1) Thank your friend
2) describe your watch
3) tell him what you want him to do.
Dear Tim,
I hope this letter finds you well, Although it’s such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer.
Thank you so much for the pleasant stay that I had at your place in Portland last weekend. I was looking at the pictures you emailed, and it reminded me of all the fun that we had at the party, especially your dance and the delicious food cooked by your parents. I must admit they are incredible humans.
When i got back , I realised that I had left my watch in your bedroom’s dresser. It is the same one that you liked and wanted to buy from watch-kart. Let me remind you again, it has a black wrist chain and white dial with blue numbers, the brand is Fossil, and I remember keeping it on the top of the dresser board on Saturday night before going to bed.
I know I have been utterly careless here, and wouldn’t intend to bother you with the hassle of the courier, but my wife gifted this watch, so it is imperative that I get it back before she gets disheartened. One of our school friend Charles Davis will be travelling from your place to Seattle tomorrow, so if could hand it over to him, then I would probably get it by Monday.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best
AT
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... they are incredible humans. When i got back , I realised that I had left m...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...incredible humans. When i got back , I realised that I had left my watch in ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4224137931 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36814996242 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64224137931 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.480919705 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381502673754 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128046031087 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771825983867 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181941863742 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063971387962 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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