You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for the residents.
Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe the problem
say what you think the council should do about the situation
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the problems which residents are facing due to ammendments in existing regulations. I am the chairperson of the EverGreen society and currently running a shopping mart in same. I am expecting that you should take some immediate action against it.
Initially, It seemed fine to change the laws for parking and people were getting used to it. As they started parking there auxiliary vehicles outside the society campus near park which made gigantic space to build new footpath for residents. Furthermore, the parked cars are not safe anymore as there is no guard to patrol the vicinity in late night hours. Recently, two cars had been stolen and in some of the vehicles tyres were missing.
Would it be possible to allocate the full time guards to that area? It would be benefical for old people and kids in terms of their safety who uses the park frequently. It might incur the cost for hiring new safety personnel and people from locality are ready to bear the cost. Please let me know how soon can we expect these changes and let me know if we can meet in person to discuss more.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rently running a shopping mart in same. I am expecting that you should take some ...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...cently, two cars had been stolen and in some of the vehicles tyres were missing. Would ...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... Would it be possible to allocate the full time guards to that area? It would be benefi...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours Faithfully Apoorva Chikara
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71759259259 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40284021898 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0189644291 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3846153846 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152484582218 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465758952684 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332728811694 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085007419492 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174762472728 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.