You live in a room in a college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter.
Describe the situation
Explain your problems and why is it difficult to study.
Say what kind of accommodation would you prefer
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I have been extremely annoyed in the last few weeks by the loud noises that my next room neighbor is making. I have a really important exam coming next month and I have been preparing for nearly a year. If I can’t be in a quiet space in my own apartment then I might as well not do the exam at all, because I will surely fail.
Let me explain my current situation. Every day at night I begin to prepare my self for my Financial Accounting exam that will be held at the end of this month, but my neighbor insists on playing his electric guitar every evening without any consideration for all the people around him. In addition, I am a quiet person in general therefore I prefer to stay in a calm environment most of my time.
Would you kindly think about providing another room for either me or my neighbor. This is a big problem and need to be resolved as soon as possible. If no other rooms are available, please install a sound blockage around each room so that every individual cannot affect the other in any way.
Thank you for your time.
Yours faithfully,
Omar Zeidan
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- You live in a room in a college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In the letter Describe the situat 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to let you know that I have...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...ening without any consideration for all the people around him. In addition, I am a quiet person in ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, in general, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37558685446 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41913500392 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8026399101 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7272727273 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104399149371 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436367140381 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454604924077 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815003720533 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384749459482 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.