You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he/she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear the Accommodation Office,
I am writing this letter to require a new room next term and it is better with a single room.
I share a room in college with my roommate. Innitially, it seems pretty hard for me to concentrate on learning and working. The valid reason for this requirement is that she always has her friends visiting and has parties all night long in the room. Additionally, my intense study schedules become even more occupied with tidying our room for her parts. As adaptability is an essential factor which every college students need, I can not stand her glaring behaviors any longer. Due to the fact that, she frequently borrows my things and even take its without my permission. All of these put a strain on my own life and have an adverse bearing on my academic performance this term.
Concerning this matter, my proposal is moving to a new room. In personal speaking, I suggest a single room because sharing a room with another students do more harm than good to me. It engenders some valid concerns about spending my limited time in the last semester on making acquantance with new friends and adjusting my own life to be compatible with her. Thank you so much for your attention. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Uyen.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...quently borrows my things and even take its without my permission. All of these put...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72197309417 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66188733637 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645739910314 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9541758679 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2142857143 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276176453648 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955099551479 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062217361437 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137261670827 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852696576104 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...quently borrows my things and even take its without my permission. All of these put...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72197309417 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66188733637 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645739910314 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9541758679 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2142857143 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276176453648 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955099551479 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062217361437 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137261670827 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852696576104 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.