You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer, describe the situation, explain your problem and why is it difficult to work, Say what kind of accommodation u would prefer.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living condition. Thou, the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has been inconsiderate lately, making the environment not conducive to work. I hope you will consider my situation favourably.
Let me explain my situation. The trouble started about two months ago,when my new housemate moved in. Prior to that, everything was perfect, my former housemate was extremely considerate, we both enjoyed our stay. But unfortunately, my new housemate enjoy playing music as he turns the volume of his woofer to highest,it always affect my sleep. This unpleasant noise keeps occurring all night. I have not been able to concentrate on my studies as this could have negative impact on my studies.
Would you please move me or my housemate to another room? I would prefer to live with someone who is quiet and more considerate. I would not mind whom I stay with as long as we understand each other and does not disturb while studying.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ill consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. The trouble...
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...The trouble started about two months ago,when my new housemate moved in. Prior to tha...
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...d have negative impact on my studies. Would you please move me or my housemate...
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...g. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Jane.
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...our consideration. Yours faithfully, Jane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90645832587 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5892812343 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9285714286 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167280086768 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682539402297 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587972431401 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131232212831 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598765384199 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.