You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
Greetings!
I stay in college room number 221 along with another student who is my class mate. I am writing this letter as I face lots of problem with this arrangements and it is highly difficult to work.
First of all, the room size is very small it can accommodate only the double bed. It hardly has space a person to move around. Another major problem is the toilet and wash room. As there is no separate wash basin option one has to wait for another person to come out of the wash room even to fresh-up - like washing face, tooth brushing. It becomes time-consuming to both us to get ready if we have get ready at the same time. It is practically difficult to manage in sharing accommodation particularly for the classmates.
I prefer to stay in single accommodation in the same room where I put-up now. So that, I will have enough space to move around by replacing the existing double cot to single cot. With regards to toilet and washroom, there will not be any problem as such explained earlier as I will be the only person to accommodate the room.
I ask you to make these arrangement as early as possible.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Manivasan.G
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- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter•describe the situa 73
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letterdescribe the situatio 56
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letterdescribe the situatio 73
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter•describe the situa 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...ate. I am writing this letter as I face lots of problem with this arrangements and it is highly...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s letter as I face lots of problem with this arrangements and it is highly difficult...
^^^^
Line 7, column 400, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...ming to both us to get ready if we have get ready at the same time. It is practical...
^^^
Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e any problem as such explained earlier as I will be the only person to accommodat...
^^
Line 11, column 19, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this arrangement' or 'these arrangements'?
Suggestion: this arrangement; these arrangements
...mmodate the room. I ask you to make these arrangement as early as possible. Thanking you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6320754717 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66348252668 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1682685203 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5384615385 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278206026598 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910664975136 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736489037305 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155350296869 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824161778779 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.