You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter:
• Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight.
• Explain how missing your flight affected you.
• Make it clear what you would like the airline to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Nishit Mehta and I am a frequent traveler from Mumbai to Delhi because of my work demands.As I always have an amazing experience with Aeroflot,this time I was very disappointed with the service and behaviour of the staff.I am writing to complain about the staff's unprofessional behaviour.
As I had an urgent meeting on Tuesday to Delhi in the morning at 10:00, I booked a flight in advance.I reached airport 3 hours before schedule time like I do mostly.But to my surprise,I was informed to wait for a while by the staff as they said there is a system failure.The notifications on the computer highlighted that the amount was not paid and can not proceed further for boarding.When I raised my concern to the higher authority showing this ,they straight away denied to help.Instead,they blamed me for not paying the amount and did baseless arguments.As a result,at last I missed my flight and had a huge loss of time and money.
I am exceedingly displeased with a staff attitude and consequences arisen,thus I demand for full refund of my ticket.
I will appreciate an immediate action from customer service department.
Yours faithfully,
Nishit Mehta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15759402077 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 16.3608247423 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.549010286 44.8134815571 499% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.8 76.5299724578 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.0 16.8248392259 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0754410348023 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338983214923 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038906971322 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0255472507959 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391852564664 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 8.37731958763 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 8.54432989691 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.