You missed an important meeting at work Write a letter to your manager In the letter Apologize for not going Explain why you were not there Say how you will make up for it

Dear Sir,

I hope your day is going great. I am writing this letter because of my absence at the board meeting which was held today by 8:00am.

To beging with, I am so sorry that I could not attend the meeting that took place this morning given that I am the Head of Admin of this organization. Please accept my sincere apology since I was not supposed to miss that meeting for anything.

To continue, my reason for not attending is because of some unforseen circumstances. Early this morning, as I was about driving out of my house, I got a call from my mum that she is not feeling too well, so I rushed down to her house immediately. However, when I got to my mum's house, she was already waiting downstairs, so I picked her up and went straight to the hospital.

To conclude, I am going to make it up to you sir. Mark sent me the routine for the week which was discussed at the meeting. I am going to ensure that the letters are dispatched to the Governor before the week runs out.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Adam.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29949238579 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4267145045 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3855386932 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204886320915 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886998044724 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066839098737 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125238228091 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637405025494 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.