Dear Sam,
I know I planned to visit Canada on 4th February 2022 but there’s an event at home I’ll have to be in attendance.
It is the burial ceremony of my late uncle Uche that was a former Commissioner of Sports in Abia State. He gave up the ghost on 28th January 2022 after a brief illness. This came as a shock to the whole family but life has to go on.
I’m really sorry about the disappointment and I promise to make it up to you once I arrive. We had a lot of involvements mapped out for this particular visit and I’m still looking forward to each one.
The summer will be a good time to come over, because there will be fewer activities for me to engage in. During my leave from work I’d be chanced too or we can just come up with a date that will suit both of us since I am the CEO of my company.
See you soon.
All the best,
Adam Grant
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I know I planned to visit Canada on 4th ...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... See you soon. All the best, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^
Line 22, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. All the best, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24418604651 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25629340386 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709302325581 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9329437933 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150638378687 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502460808482 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063606515919 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916426925771 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876771335988 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I know I planned to visit Canada on 4th ...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... See you soon. All the best, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^
Line 22, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. All the best, Adam Grant
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24418604651 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25629340386 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709302325581 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9329437933 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150638378687 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502460808482 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063606515919 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916426925771 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876771335988 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.